My poem has been accepted and published at Spillwords. Hurrah!
I weaved a wreath of wild spring flowers,
to crown my waist length rippling black hair,
I unraveled each carefully plaited pinned lock,
letting my dark hair loosely fall without a care.
Beneath the boughs of a blooming cherry tree,
I captured still moments of the pink falling rain;
placing the sweet floral wreath upon my head,
I was pictured in wide smiles I could not feign!
See the full poem here: https://spillwords.com/the-rocky-road-to-beauty/


Lovely poem! (And as a plus, I discovered Spillwords.)
Peace,
LaMon
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Thank you so much. ๐ They publish poems on religion and spirituality too ๐ Peace to you too.
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Very nicely expressed
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Thank you, Sanjay. Best wishes ๐ธ
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Best wishes from this side too Leah ๐
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Beautiful poem and presentation. ๐ธ
“pink falling rain” ๐๐ป
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Thank you Michele . ๐ธ Best wishes . โฅ๏ธ
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I love your ability to stage several words together in a phrase and in a way that each word has an effective rhyme and meaning. Congratulations on your poem being published on Spillwords xx
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Thank you so much. You’re very kind ๐
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Exquisite poem once again. So much expressed in these few lines. Loved it.
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Thank you very much ๐
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Lovely poem! ๐
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Thank you so much ๐
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My pleasure. ๐
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Very good poem, love it.
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Thank you Fred :).
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You’re welcome Leah.
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So good!
Linda xx
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Thank you Linda โค๏ธ. Much appreciated
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