In dreams, I fall through pleasing stars
there thrives no tragic gloom;
and then when daylight fades the night
blasts chilling cries of doom.
I do not pine for the garish bright sun
least favorite of all stars;
"now, the bullets can pierce the souls",
says the commander of wars.
Pull down the sun from up the skies
let us bury those that died;
a new day and dawn will do no good
it will rip hearts open wide.
Shrills and trills and wails and cries
are heard each passing day;
the death of a child crushes my soul
to which God should I pray?
Helpless, worthless, brown as I am
rights are reserved for a few;
DAMNED are you if you call for peace
they will, surely, come for you.
Pitiless, vengeful, the hearts of men
they quell 'nd cause bloodshed;
and tho' their fathers died en masse
they blow their neighbor's head.
Dear stars, I hate the merciless sun
it will often bruise and burn;
the war grounds reek of cruel hate
will humanity ever return?
I do not wish for a bloody red sun
but for your sparkling beams;
your kindly light puts all to sleep
brings peace to fitful dreams.
© Copyright: Leah Chrestien. December 2023. The post ‘My Least Favorite Star’ first appeared on The Ecstatic Storyteller. The author reserves the right to the content. No reproduction of content in any form is permitted without the prior consent of the author.



Excellent and appropriate
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Thank you 🙏
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Wonderfully expressed,touchy
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Thank you Sanjay. Best wishes 🌺
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Best wishes dear
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The ravages of war very well depicted. How the blood thirsty war mongers swoop down at the opportune moment of dawn and thus making Sun not so favourite star! 💖😍
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That is such a well framed comment. So true and heart-breaking. 😦
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I got chills
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I tried to keep it as raw and vulnerable as possible. Thank you for your reading. _/\_
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Your poetry flows so beautifully and is expressed to such detail, Leah..
Poignant 🤍✨
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Thank you, Destiny. It was tough to write mostly because of the theme. Best wishes. 🌺
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Clearly a chilling one..🌹
my pleasure and best wishes your way too.🙏🤍
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that was truly an out of body experience and quite profound and left me in awe. stunning and captivating. peace and respect
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I went through a lot of personal emotions while writing it. Your comment means a lot. Wish you peace and light.
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you are a blessed soul and been here before and tapped into a whole different orbit. respect and the best
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you are a very uplifting light of source, truly appreciated
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Poignant and gorgeously written poem✍🏾🖤
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it. 🙂
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“will humanity ever return” – magnificent.
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“there thrives no tragic gloom;”
Wow.
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One thing you convey with the art ”to get people thinking” succeeded extremely well!!
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