The word ekphrasis, or ecphrasis, comes from the Greek for the written description of a work of art. It is a vivid, often dramatic, verbal description of a visual work of art, either real or imagined. – Wikipedia
This is the second poem in the Ekphrasis series of poetry. In the aforementioned series, I compose poems on my favorite art works. Here, I choose a very vivid painting by the Italian painter Caravaggio and try to capture the sentiments of one of his famous paintings which goes by the name of Narcissus. This painting captures the moment when the youth falls in love with his own reflection.
If there is any painting that you would like me to write about, I am open to your suggestions. Thanks!
Peering into still and clear waters furrowed brows and downcast eyes, struck with wonder, smitten with love, he lingers under black and sombre skies. Firmly rooted to his very spot, enamored by his own form sublime, a glorious earthling in youthful prime, untarnished by the curse of ravaging time. Narcissus ! You need no resplendent robes to bedeck your soft and supple skin; those skilled at art will want to carve your cavernous eyes and chiseled chin. Narcissus ! How often you dismiss true love - leave lovely maidens in pitiful rue; O paragon of rare and radiant beauty! Why cannot we take our eyes off you? Narcissus ! Why seek solace from vanity - reflection of your face but not your soul? When the water dries and all is barren, your heart might resemble a gaping hole. Narcissus ! Respond to our earthly calls, arise and partake in this mortal realm, fall not under the spell of fleeting youth - your frail heart and soul not overwhelm. Narcissus ! Seek the comfort of day's light, dwell not too long in saturnine moods; the sky lark warbles - so listen closely - there's music in trees and Echo in woods. Narcissus ! Lean away from the edge, look beyond your beauty's guise; lest you fall into the spurious pool and bring about your untimely demise.
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Beautifully done! Thanks for sharing it.,
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Thanks Lynette! Hope you’re well 🙂
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I am, thanks. 🙂
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This is so great. Thank you for this one.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A great piece to go with the painting. Well done indeed.
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Thank you David. Much appreciated 🙂
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I like the contrast in what can be loved looking up toward the sky as opposed to the ultimately downward murk of self. In the two-four lines’ rhymes there’s much to admire in the skies over sublime prime time, the supple skin of vanity lost from maidens who might moon over it if seen and not of rued day when fleeting youth sailed away from mortal realms and Narcissus never got to read this Ekphrasis for him. Pity the fellow. Here others may read.
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Thank you Doug for your lovely comment is poetry in itself. Wonderfully paraphrased. Best wishes . 🌸
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